After a while of English professor chats, I realized a lot of issues I had with assuming others can draw blanks. I really really want some criticism now that I have changed nearly all of my works, because I want to know when I say something you don't understand.

I know it's all types of fun to have artistic licenses on how poetry is structured and the magic of letting the reader interpret their own meaning, but that isn't what the fat cats want.

So attack me, make suggestions, and voice where I lost you. Because I really want to convey what I mean, and I know why I wrote the things I wrote, so I can't see the missing details.

I dare you not to enjoy the poetry you'll read anyways.